Girl Walks Into a Bar

After watching “Girl Walks Into a Bar” last night I found a new style I wanted experiment with. By no means a completely originals style, but something I’ve rarely used. “Girl…” was released directly to the internet by Sebastian Gutierrez scribe to “Snakes on a Plane”. I don’t know if it was an official tagline, but someone billed the movie as: “Ten bars. One night.” Using just those locations and an equal number of scenes Gutierrez ably crafted an interesting and humorous story. Fewer scenes prevented the piece from becoming cluttered and unruly.

I need to work on my scene work to begin with. I can see an entire story in my mind’s eye, but I often lose track when I get down to the nitty-gritty.

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